proposal

hi, great work sandra!

just a few comments.

- shall we explicitly state that the project will be long term, since they asked?
- mention that paper is biodegradable will plastic is not.
-mention that we are in the victoria integrated programme and not just in vjc. (they might be more interested in hearing what we have to say)
- "All of us love BreadTalk as much as food loves salt." is it a bit exaggerated? maybe give real facts like we visit breadtalk at least twice a week. something like that
- mention the no. of breadtalk outlets after saying the estimated no. plastic bags used in a day to give the seriousness of the situation.

other than that i think its very good, especially how you fit in all the praises =D

margaret
marjorie